Writing an archaeology-related
haiku, using a visual prompt
by John Deyab
Special Education Department
Charlestown High School
for Service Learning Project
PreSERVING America’s Past With the Objects of Our History
Objective: Students
will write a haiku related to archaeology, using a visual prompt.
Materials: teacher-made
haiku checklist, writing paper, pencils, AlphaSmart computers, The Big
Dig & The Big Dig at Night by Dan McNichol
Activities:
- [Photo searching with a partner] In pairs,
students examine books, perusing and discussing photos. Within five
to eight minutes, each student chooses a photo to use as a visual prompt
for haiku-writing activity.
- [Brain-storming with a partner] With same student
pairs, students examine each photo, and brain-storm words suggested
by photos (e.g., in a color photo showing male construction workers
drilling into concrete, students might write such words as hardhat,
concrete, drill, noise, muscles, etc.
- [Teacher approval of word lists] Each student
pair has a “mini-conference” with teacher or classroom paraprofessional,
to ensure words are appropriate, relevant. If students encounter “writer’s
block” (or other problems, word retrieval issues, etc.), the teacher
or paraprofessional may prod students, asking pointed questions related
to photos in order to jar memory, to suggest ideas, words.
- [Counting is key!] Teacher creates new student
pairings, pairing up student who has good understanding of syllabification,
and student who may need assistance. Students count out syllables in
each word on students’ word lists.
- [Sharing First Drafts] After both students in
student pairings count all words on each list, then each student begins
to write first draft of haiku, with brain-storming assistance from peer,
as needed and requested. Teacher and classroom paraprofessional supervise
students, answer questions as needed, and provide input as needed and
requested.
- [Sharing our first drafts orally] Teacher asks
for volunteers to share, orally, first drafts of haikus. If no student
volunteers, teacher selects one or two students who have written a first
draft that, at first glance, is an appropriate exemplar. (contains correct
number of syllables for each line, uses words that accurately reflect
photograph’s content, etc.)
- [Assign homework] Find a photograph in a newspaper
in which student can write a haiku, cut out photograph, and make a list
of ten words suggested by photograph. Be prepared to explain to class
tomorrow why student found photograph interesting and/or why student
chose the photo for activity.
Assessment: Teacher
informally assesses students as they work in pairs: brainstorm ideas,
come up with words for word lists. Haikus that accurately reflect visual
images of student’s chosen photograph and contain correct number
of syllables for each line will receive “Passing” grade. Students
who continue to work on haikus, develop a final draft, using Microsoft
Word with at least one visual image (from Clip Art, image from other software
source, etc.) will receive “Outstanding” grade: A +. |