Samples of Third Grade
Writing with Writing Response Protocols
Rain
Running down the street
The rain charging at me
Like a pointy ice sickle
Like a shattering glass
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I'm a Pumpkin Seed
When I was a tear drop seed I was slippery. I was in star market. When I met my owner. He was a farmer. His name was Matthew. When he gently put me in the soil. I turned in to a pumpkin plant. My petals were dancing. I'm a pumpkin now. I'm gold then orange. He plucked my vine. It did not hurt. I became flat and the next year my brother's will grow from my seeds.
Written by Michael S___________
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